"I took an overdose in life
And fell into a state of indifference"

Comatose in carelessness I think of the world around me
But what's there to think about when there is nothing to see

Art is vandalism
War is patriotism
Wishing is the new form of abolitionism

No need for a leader, we're already a herd
But we think we're moving on when we're really going backwards

Since we're constantly moving in a confused state of reverse
There would be no problem with me to disperse

So cut the IV's, I'm sick of despairing
Outcasted in this life, so I might as well start caring.

I liked it. Wish it were longer, but I liked it.

word cuz.

this is prime...like from the rhyming
to every single point you made
it was line after line man...
ah prime.

That was good I liked it. keep it up.

Life ain't fair, playing truth or dare with the hare.
cuz you can't win, your not the turtle.
Not chillin but in a hurry like at the same time jumping the first and second hurdle

Ummm, ok Aesop.

Nice very nice. I liked it.