This is a layout i did for my schools gaming club (the website)
http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s234/Sinehremark/diffeffects.jpg
The second draft of that, (i hate them both, but it was my first web design)
http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s234/Sinehremark/finished.jpg
And this is a quick CD cover i did for friend, up and coming rap artist B.R.I.T, (http://www.myspace.com/lyricallyadaptable) Just messin around with selective color and smudging
http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s234/Sinehremark/britproto.jpg

they look cool

Thanks derrick

The red does not flow at all and the logo is boring.

I think the picture for The Gamers Union looks wierd. And atleast make it say Halo or put a picture from COD4.

I know I laughed at it because its like call of duty 4 in big bold letters. Then a picture of halo character next to it. haha

I like the first one the most but I don't really like the buttons for some reason

I like the first one the most but I don't really like the buttons for some reason

i didn't like the buttons either. its too off balance you cant have a light one like the crosshairs and a heavy one, such as the house. they all need to be similar

and not to mention the logo could have been done by a monkey. you cant even read it. and yes im trying to be mean, not give constructive criticism