View Full Version : Another one


Tyler Self
07-08-2008, 11:57 PM
I could be a soldier
Fighting for who I hate the least
but I don't risk my life
I don't believe in guns

I could be a student
Sitting in classes of empty shells
but I use my creativity
I live by no standards

I could be a home owner
living in a dangerous neighborhood
but wherever I lay my head is home
I live off the land

I could be a spouse
answering to my significant other
but no one keeps me from what I love
I am free

I could be successful
gaining from what others lose
but I don't want to waste my time
I want to be me

xXSkater14Xx
07-09-2008, 12:04 AM
That was great man.

Really liked it

Skaterbabe15
07-09-2008, 12:06 AM
that was really good.

awesome writing.

FightFlyCrow
07-09-2008, 12:47 AM
I feel like I should leave you a comment, but I am not sure wht to say. I am going to reread it tommorow, and maybe will have some sort of insight then.

Tyler Self
07-09-2008, 12:49 AM
Stop drinking the Hurricane d00d. :)

Madison
07-09-2008, 12:56 AM
That was good, it was very meaningful. I liked it. :icon_yes:

fogle
08-28-2008, 06:52 PM
Nice poem I liked the meaning and everything

bartelttskater
08-28-2008, 07:20 PM
nice. that was cool