rekees
07-15-2008, 12:27 PM
Looks like paradise in this shiny summer
Wintery clouds and cold rain and the everlasting darkness
Sweapt away by the bright lights of mother natures one of a kind
Rays of joy and streams of light
Coming from the man of might
Overwhelming with tears of joy
I cried and cried
And cried
It was beautiful, the sparkles of water
The rays of light, bouncing and chukles on the water.
Ever was it so delightful to my taste
I cried and cried
And cried
Not of sadness
Not of sadness
But because this wonder of the man of might
What he has created
The everlasting feeling
The wind blousing on my skin
Touching, tingling, like a ripple on a wave
The creaks and sounds of the animals made by the man of might
Making as much noise it could possibly make
Never thought this feeling could take
Its toll on my life and choices, and everlasting life
But now its not the feeling of summer, but yet the feeling of life
Because as much as i loved it, and as much as i cried
This beam of light
From the man of might
The thought of it made a sight
Who is this man of might?
The man of might, was he good? And was he right?
This peaceful earth and beauty bleaches
I wonder
I Wonder
He made the earth and mother nature,
But was it right?
Was it right?
My first poem, rate/hate
Wintery clouds and cold rain and the everlasting darkness
Sweapt away by the bright lights of mother natures one of a kind
Rays of joy and streams of light
Coming from the man of might
Overwhelming with tears of joy
I cried and cried
And cried
It was beautiful, the sparkles of water
The rays of light, bouncing and chukles on the water.
Ever was it so delightful to my taste
I cried and cried
And cried
Not of sadness
Not of sadness
But because this wonder of the man of might
What he has created
The everlasting feeling
The wind blousing on my skin
Touching, tingling, like a ripple on a wave
The creaks and sounds of the animals made by the man of might
Making as much noise it could possibly make
Never thought this feeling could take
Its toll on my life and choices, and everlasting life
But now its not the feeling of summer, but yet the feeling of life
Because as much as i loved it, and as much as i cried
This beam of light
From the man of might
The thought of it made a sight
Who is this man of might?
The man of might, was he good? And was he right?
This peaceful earth and beauty bleaches
I wonder
I Wonder
He made the earth and mother nature,
But was it right?
Was it right?
My first poem, rate/hate