I pledge alliegence
To tyrannical leaders
Who rule over the people
With a mighty fist

I pledge alliegence
To our leaders in congress
Whos only goal
Is to dream up wars for young people to die in

I pledge alliegence
To the greatest country on Earth
With its slouching economy
And overweight civillians

The flag with its Red, White, and Blue
Is supposed to be the symbol of hope, freedom, and peace worldwide
Shouldnt we, as citizens, be doing more to help maintain that image?
Stop complaining.
Start Doing.

*i know this poem really is not that good. just kinda whats on my mind right now. comments whether they be negative or positive are welcome.

It is very forced...sounds like you wrote it in about 2 minutes.

And doesn't your two end lines call your own poem dumb?

Wouldn't think of it as a good poem.
But a point that I agree with.