LukEASY
08-29-2008, 01:29 PM
the sun was shining,
what a beautiful day.
but the sky seems to dim.
-- where did the sun go?
a quick glance; an answer.
hmm, odd, the tv man said sun.
i lie down; serenity; rest.
then, a drop. and another.
and another, in succession with each other.
faster and faster they fall; my picnic ruined.
"oh well", i think as i pack.
i suppose tomorrow'll be better; no promises.
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i'm no poet, it's just i've been really stressed out, sat down at my computer and this is what i came up with. it's basically about how you can't really trust anything people say, even when they promise you. i don't know, hopefully that's the vibe you got from this when reading.
what a beautiful day.
but the sky seems to dim.
-- where did the sun go?
a quick glance; an answer.
hmm, odd, the tv man said sun.
i lie down; serenity; rest.
then, a drop. and another.
and another, in succession with each other.
faster and faster they fall; my picnic ruined.
"oh well", i think as i pack.
i suppose tomorrow'll be better; no promises.
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i'm no poet, it's just i've been really stressed out, sat down at my computer and this is what i came up with. it's basically about how you can't really trust anything people say, even when they promise you. i don't know, hopefully that's the vibe you got from this when reading.