View Full Version : small talk; real talk


LukEASY
08-29-2008, 01:29 PM
the sun was shining,
what a beautiful day.
but the sky seems to dim.
-- where did the sun go?
a quick glance; an answer.
hmm, odd, the tv man said sun.
i lie down; serenity; rest.
then, a drop. and another.
and another, in succession with each other.
faster and faster they fall; my picnic ruined.
"oh well", i think as i pack.
i suppose tomorrow'll be better; no promises.
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i'm no poet, it's just i've been really stressed out, sat down at my computer and this is what i came up with. it's basically about how you can't really trust anything people say, even when they promise you. i don't know, hopefully that's the vibe you got from this when reading.

RIP_BOB_GNARLY
08-29-2008, 03:35 PM
It makes no sense to me.

LukEASY
08-29-2008, 05:45 PM
it's basically about how fast things can go from good to bad because you can't count on what people say. like he thought it was going to be a good day outside because the guy on tv said it was supposed to be sunny, then just like that it rained and his day was ruined. idk, i'm not a ****ing poet, i just wrote it because i'm stressed out.

Lobo
08-29-2008, 06:13 PM
hey man that's pretty cool.