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    Default First Time Writing Lyrics, Let Me Know What You Think!

    I just started with the chorus because that was what I originally started writing. It's only a chorus and a verse so far.

    Chorus:
    I'm falling down
    There's no stopping now
    I'm falling down
    WHERE ARE YOU NOW?
    I'm falling down
    I need to leave this town
    I'm falling down

    Verse:
    Before I hit the ground
    You need to look around
    And search to find the truth
    Just hope it don't hurt you
    The way it did to me
    Please come and set me free

    And then the chrous would repeat again, I suppose.
    I wrote the verse in like 5 minutes and the chorus in about 10 because I suck at rhyming and making things make sense.
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    justin biber is btr

    jk good job m8 if I wrote a song it would have the capability to burn people's ears because it would be so bad

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    Do you have chords for it yet?

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    Quote Originally Posted by RockenPunk View Post
    Do you have chords for it yet?
    No, I just started writing words in my second to last class. I'm sure I could find notes for it by toying with the keyboard.
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    Use these 4 chords and turn in into a hit song!


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    Quote Originally Posted by RockenPunk View Post
    Do you have chords for it yet?
    I was fiddling around with stuff and the chorus is C and G for pretty much all of it, but you could throw in a Bb/A# chord in there if you time it right. It's hard to explain since none of you can hear it at the moment hah
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    Quote Originally Posted by cdragon1 View Post
    I just started with the chorus because that was what I originally started writing. It's only a chorus and a verse so far.

    Chorus:
    I'm falling down
    There's no stopping now
    I'm falling down
    WHERE ARE YOU NOW?
    I'm falling down
    I need to leave this town
    I'm falling down

    Verse:
    Before I hit the ground
    You need to look around
    And search to find the truth
    Just hope it Won't hurt you
    The way it did to me
    Please come and set me free

    And then the chrous would repeat again, I suppose.
    I wrote the verse in like 5 minutes and the chorus in about 10 because I suck at rhyming and making things make sense.
    Fixed! Not bad so far. Cliche' but most hits are..

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    Quote Originally Posted by NoSwitch View Post
    Fixed! Not bad so far. Cliche' but most hits are..
    I did that on purpose. I was thinking doesn't, but it didn't fit the number of syllables. I guess that works too, though.
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    Quote Originally Posted by NoSwitch View Post
    Fixed! Not bad so far. Cliche' but most hits are..
    don't made it sound more gangsta

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